Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is a case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Essay topics:

Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is a case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

It is well-known fact that wearing brand clothes has become more popular for the last decade. Thirty years ago people were more wisely than today. They used to buy high quality clothes, checked a fastness of fabric and very rarely were wondered about a brand. Back in that day, folks were only influenced by primitive advertisements on the radio or TV. Today it's different. Internet cites whith eye-catching ads are mesmerizing us. I think, that drawbacks of this situation are overweighting its advantages.
Obviously, citiziens are continiously pushing to use more fashion because of two important reasons. Firstly, we all know that expansive branded suit can emphasize features of a businessman. People now tend to buy a famous brands clothes to make an impression on their partners at work, to be elegant and unic. Secondly, there are a lot of people who enjoy shopping through the internet. Every single clothes brand has its own website, where you can purchase anything you need.
Finally, I want to talk about drawbacks of this tend. To give a clear example, I want to tell about some Ukrainian stores that appeared roughly 10 years ago. These stores are gloried by they own high quality clothes for a relatively small price. You can buy there three pair of jeans for the price of the one Dolce Gabbana. In my opinion, quality of those Ukrainian jeans are much better than a second one. So, if you not encouregaded brand names you will able to spare a lot of money and wear better quality clothes.
In conclusion, I'd like to say that there is no need for us to buy a fashionable clothing, I think we should spend more money for our health and education.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: pairs
...ly small price. You can buy there three pair of jeans for the price of the one Dolce...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...etter quality clothes. In conclusion, Id like to say that there is no need for u...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230529595016 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.165109034268 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0841121495327 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560747663551 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0685358255452 0.0437548338989 157% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11214953271 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0280373831776 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6306065201 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342679127726 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0778816199377 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0155763239875 0.021408717616 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00934579439252 0.011925033212 78% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1665.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78125 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3125 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236111111111 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104166666667 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6306065201 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.56093040696 115% => OK
Word variations: 75.2514246818 60.7387585426 124% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1578947368 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7462872467 49.517814964 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6315789474 127.492653851 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.814263465372 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 38.769005848 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.27956989247 1.69124875643 76% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17529524284 0.332605444948 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0642611437426 0.102741220458 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0610391928639 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.402498234354 0.534860350844 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158023834448 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519366193861 0.134430193775 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437464518754 0.0742795772207 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219674668441 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0577183798595 0.0638462369009 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115182350829 0.228012699653 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140052071612 0.058150111329 24% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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