MANY PEOPLE LIKE TO WEAR FASHIONABLE CLOTHS.
WHY DO YOU THINK THIS IS THE CASE ?
IS THIS A GOOD THING OR A BAD THING ?
The tendency to cloth yourself in trendy outfits is a common fashion nowadays. There are many reasons for the behavioral pattern of people when it comes to fashion quotient. This essay will discuss the issue in the subsequent paragraphs highlighting pros and cons of fashion.
Firstly, today’s generation believes in materialism, yields to peer pressure to show off. The status symbol image has gained importance in most societies. This traps an individual and to attain a sense of belonging among his herd and one might overdo his efforts to look, wear the trendiest things to up his level in societal hierarchy. For instance, a groom’s worth is measured in India by what he wears. His designer clothing, a Tissot watch or a Tiffany jewelry depicts his status in society. Thus, wearing fashionable clothes is catching across all levels of every society.
On the other hand, fashion comes at a huge price tag. Adding to the problem is changing trends in fashion. Lately, all product lines of a fashion industry are commercialized, fashion has a shelf life. With intense level of competition among the fashion brands, the effort to gain appeal often leads to brands coming up with marketing gimmicks. For example, Tommy Hilfiger brand at most outlet stores have “0 buy 3 for $450/-“promotions, tempting people to spend more. This is often a financial strain for most, people stretch or borrow to fulfill buying sprees leading to accumulation of unwanted or low usage products.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for people to follow fashion and wear fashionable clothes. The main reason is to earn respect or status among the immediate circle of friend or family. In my opinion, this is a negative thing. If people evaluate their needs and wants, a sensible purchase is possible and accumulation of clothes through impulsive purchases can be avoided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'brand'.
Suggestion: brand
...he effort to gain appeal often leads to brands coming up with marketing gimmicks. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1568627451 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86730767222 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3366835393 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20478889942 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623134141235 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629355077685 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130666925194 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361478614777 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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