In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Obesity has become one of the main public health problems worldwide. Childhood obesity rate is growing very fast in both developed and developing countries. In U.A.E, children in the overweight category have increased for both male and female is on the rise, over the international standard. This essay will discuss the reasons for the rise in body weight and propose possible solutions with examples.
One of the biggest problems for millennial's is sedentary lifestyle. Kids today lack physical activities and eat unhealthy food a major cause for inactive living. Furthermore, kids spend hours on computers or phones daily. For instance, a child’s diet today comprises of fast food and high sugar drinks. In addition, they are consumed with internet distractions on devices, current average on time spent by kids stands at 3 hours daily. Therefore, children’s poor diet and lack of time is rendering societies with overweight kids.
Healthy habits start at home. The best way to fight or prevent childhood obesity and weight problems is to get the whole family on a healthier track. Making better food choices and becoming more active will benefit everyone, regardless of weight. For instance, a parent could lead by example. If a child sees their parent eating vegetables, being active (playing a sport) and maintain a discipline on device time, the chances a child could mimic and adopt is higher. Thus, parents should take the initiative and bring a positive change.
In conclusion, the concern of parents worldwide about overweight children is real and is alarming. This is mainly due to poor lifestyle choices, but a parent is a powerful influence and can effectively combat the problem by adopting a healthy habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78857653536 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8251928738 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779334307006 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023877826032 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416702040659 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567686397022 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498436810279 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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