In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is the fact that todays, the increasing in obesity rate among children has become a matter of great concern in many countries. There are several causes of this problem, and some solutions can be taken into account to solve it.
There are two main reasons why more and more kids become overweight these days. Firstly, the development of technology has brought various forms of passive entertainment such as playing computer games or watching TV into children life. This leads to the consequence that instead of going out to join in physical activities like playing badminton or soccer, kids nowadays choose to stay at home and experience a sedentary lifestyle. Secondly, fast food and ready meals which usually contain more than enough energy for a person per day are advertised mainly to attract children and family for achieving profit. The target of those company is to raise their interest in fried and high calories food and make them be addicted to an unhealthy eating habit. This means that our children will easily become overweight if we do not have any action to encourage them to get on with healthier diets.
To solve this problem, parents should spend more time concentrating on training good habits for their children since they are the ones whom children always put their trust in. For examples, a child should be nurtured his or her interests in participating in sports and physical activities through family activities such as a holiday at beach or playing soccer together. Beside that, the government and media should promote knowledge about healthy lifestyle and obesity on a daily basis for their citizens to realize the importance of having a cooked fresh meal.
In conclusion, although the problem of obesity among children is more popular in many countries these days by certain reasons, some solutions should be proceeded by both individuals and the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'those companies'?
Suggestion: this company; those companies
...ily for achieving profit. The target of those company is to raise their interest in fried and...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
... raise their interest in fried and high calories food and make them be addicted to an un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08012820513 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61434549179 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63141025641 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0864331342 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136472138801 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506366634855 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428119745017 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953478144281 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439589297739 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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