Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?
A commonly held believe is that problems happening in society today, such as the environment or welfare for animals are recognized better by the young generation than the older one . I partly agree with this statement because of some reasons.
On one hand, it is obvious that young people are exposed to a vast amount of information about these issues from many sources such as social networks, online newspapers or friends. Thanks for the power of media, they will have the feeling of being involved and having to take some responsibilities for a better world . One case in point is the “Earth hour” activity – which has been spread over more than 200 countries by people under 30 years old in just one week through Facebook. Meanwhile, those elderly people who do not spend too much time surfing the internet will not be influenced by campaigns which are created by the media.
On the other hand, although not being affected by the media or having much knowledge about world wide problems, citizens who come from the previous generation tent to carry out many practical solutions daily or weekly . For example, Alan Woo, who is the a director of an architecture firm often spends his weekend on cleaning public parks by collecting and sorting waste simply because he likes fresh air and pure environment . Different from young people who usually follow the crowd, actions of experienced people come from what they really want to do in their life, hence they will bring long term and functional results for society.
In conclusion, we can not deny the fact that nowadays, young generation have more opportunities to understand about the issues that human have to face, but aged habitants have their own ways to solve those problems practically
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9593220339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59704542018 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637288135593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6698017617 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.3 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182393966343 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629146353061 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414089617275 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103982458923 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00653369775301 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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