Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?
It is argued that the young generation in the modern day is more conscious of international issues such as the environment, poverty, and the animal welfare than their parents. I not only agree with this idea but also believe that their consideration can be the main driving force behind the development of the society.
On the one hand, I agree that the young people are more interested in current affairs. Firstly, thanks to the technological developments and the popularity of the computers and the smartphones, young people have no difficulty to access the Internet and search information about all issues they face today, whereas their parents could not. Subsequently, they can gain broader and more profound knowledge than the previous generation, therefore understand and sympathize with how serious situation human copes with nowadays. Furthermore, there is a significant increase in celebrities who participate in organizations to contribute to environmental and humanitarian purposes. For example, Bill Gates established the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation as well as donate money to this in order to globally enhance healthcare and reduce the extreme poverty. As a result, he became a role model for young people to take on the hard problems of the world in the present and the future.
On the other hand, I also believe that the awareness of young people about the world can provide various enormous benefits to the community. Firstly, young people who acquire with updated knowledge and are full of energy and enthusiasm can better deal with those problems than older counterparts. Moreover, in the case of the lack of ability to do so, at least their self-consciousness encourage them to accomplish simple but valuable tasks such as saving electricity and disposing of trash properly, which can contribute to a larger purpose like protecting the environment.
In conclusion, I agree that the awareness of the young generation of the current affairs is correct and this brings a number of advantages to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24615384615 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05692199816 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8449679841 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.083333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243616574153 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850908132352 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697531186674 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136718712744 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437819713626 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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