Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more more disadvantages or advantages.
Numerous circumstances occur in life that would compel us to work for long working hours. Working overtime has become a common phenomenon in modern world that comes with its own challenges. This essay will explore constructive arguments to showcase that the negatives of working more than required hours far surpasses its positives.
Undeniably, good health is utmost important for living a joyful life. Health adversely gets affected when a person works till late night as it shakes the sleeping pattern. Severe headaches, for instance, occurs mostly when one has worked for continuous long hours and not had adequate sleep. Not only the health is targeted but also the mood. People usually gets angry quickly due to the fact that mind did not get sufficient rest. A recent study outlined that the brain requires a minimum of ten hours of break in order to function well which consequently affects the human's mood.
Another relative known aspect that warrants favoring limited working hours is family time. All human beings have families and friends and it is the core responsibility of all to spend some time with them. With prolonged working hours, family time gets cut off which affects the bond between the members. For instance, if a Father is occupied with work, children will less interact with him and the gap between them will arise.
Additionally, the pressure of monotonous schedule will sit on one's head. People will be highly demotivated at one point of time and will not be able to focus on their hobbies. For example, many middle aged men complains that they have lost interest in their hobbies due to overwork.
By and large, everything looks best in right proportion. One should work hard but not at the cost of healthy lifestyle and close ones. Therefore, leisure time is equally significant as working hours and one should not cease it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ion well which consequently affects the humans mood. Another relative known aspect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01607717042 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49916808772 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639871382637 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2719283022 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1052631579 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231955596123 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630066538577 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507216278266 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117570750179 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033194625459 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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