Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In the past ,people used to do daily activities on their own, as the time changed the way of living also changed, now a days we are using electronic equipment’s like washing machine, hand-held mixer, vacuum cleaner etc. By using these we can save time and do some productive work. Every coin has two faces, there are some cons also, by utilising these home appliances a lot of energy is consumed.
Firstly, let's discuss the positive traits, in this modern world women are also going to work, it is more useful for them so that they can complete the daily chores in time and leave for work. After coming from work they rust switch on the machine and can spend some time with their children and other family members. Secondly, the burden will be reduced to some extent not completely. Previously we used wash our clothes thereto so much of time consuming, but now the machine does 75 percent of the work only drying the clothes part is to be done by us. Every one can buy these products as they became affordable to most of the people.
Moreover, as earlier said these products consume more energy and effecting the environment and creating health problems. For small chores also they are using machines for example, dough maker, it is used to knead the dough, we can knead by ourselves by doing in this way some hand exercise will be there by this blood can circulate to eve, part of the body . Not only this the refrigerator releases Chloro-Floro carbon gases which leads to depletion of ozone layer ,which acts as a barrier between sun and earth, as sun rays contains of Us rays. If this layer is not there then the UV says (Inert fall on human skin which leads to cancel and other skin diseases. However if more energy is consumed there wont be any energy and fuel for our future generations.
I conclude that, depending completely on a machine is not good, a few things we can't avoid but using them appropriately makes life ease,. we need to balance eco-system too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60623229462 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39997978435 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580736543909 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2301945348 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187706793316 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552314710834 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494758830915 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998621915063 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381186536361 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.