Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession, what factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opnion, should be done about it ?
Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is widely believed that these days a lot of graduates are unable to find a job in their preferred profession. One of the significant reason for this is everychanging trend in job market due to advancement in technology. In my opinion, it requires more awareness among people towards selecting right profession as per their potential and creating more job opportunities.
Admittedly, their are some basic reasons why graduates are not able to find the job of their choice. Firstly, Due to over population there is always high number of applicants, therefore competition is very high and only few candidate are able to make that cut. Secondly, Profession is very lucrative field and most of the graduates wants to join high end jobs to earn better packages. This further affects the balance and their is uneven distribution such as for few jobs their is no applicant and on the other side their is huge queue to get offer.
Furthermore, their are few jobs where people are unable to get job due to strict selection process. For example, the selection criteria in defence forces such as army, navy and airforce. Another serious issue is that many graduate lack in effective career planning and do not have visibility to any specialized course they must do for the desired job. In addition, they do not have view to changes happening in outside world due to technological innovations, or skills required to get their dream job. I believe students should get proper counselling from experts in the same field and ought to be taught on how they can get job in shortlisted profession.
In conclusion, while opinion may vary from person to person, I strongly believe striking the right balance between demand and supply with effective counselling at the secondary education level can prove to be key in changing this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98045602606 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79471234417 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4995197081 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19036196748 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726741364549 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040895664635 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111617744077 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315494174605 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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