In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
what is your opinion about this ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Although it is some times thought countryside is the only option left out in many locations to create new homes, other people think we should not harm countryside for this. In my opinion, I think we should not compromise on countryside to fulfill this need.
On the one hand,there are significant reasons to consider countryside as best option to build new homes. Firstly, urban areas are already over occupied and there is hardly any are available to build more homes. This problem can be conveniently solved by building homes in non-urban areas. Secondly,new houses can be build with better planning and will be able to accommodate more number of people. For instance, a lot of high rise apartments are getting constructed in remote areas. Thirdly,these places are preferred because of less pollution and less traffic. These are the two biggest problem every urban city is facing these days.
On the other hand, some people think that this is not a wise decision and I agree. One of the serious drawback is the depletion of ozone layer due to deforestation and global warming. This has adversely affected us and contributed towards multiple natural calamities. Furthermore, Trees help in controlling pollution which helps in reducing many respiratory diseases such as asthma. In addition, countryside have natural beauty and we should protect it to maintain ecological balance.
To conclude, entire world is struggling to find space to construct new homes and our country is no exception. I strongly believe we should do better brainstorming and take help from new technological innovations to solve problem in urban cities but should not construct new homes in countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22794117647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91012097098 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1285138579 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305816064834 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824514440313 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628812589496 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163993992091 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507645333407 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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