Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
In recent years, many employees are spending most of their day working, and have almost no chance to include sports in their daily routine, which causes them health issues. This essay will highlight both the reasons behind the negligence of exercising among working individuals, and methods to mitigate such a negative approach.
To begin with, there are various factors contributing to the little concern given to sports among employees nowadays, one of which is the relatively long working hours that companies require from their staff. This happens because employers often target to reduce salaries budget via hiring less people who are required work longer hours to get the job tasks accomplished. Consequently, since people are struggling with extended work hours, domestic chores and other life responsibilities, they tend to have no or little room for exercising. These conditions have led individuals to be extremely exhausted and in real danger of suffering from health problems on the long run.
Nevertheless, there might be some effective strategies to tackle such a harmful trend. Firstly, the labour authorities should impose a law that limits the maximum working hours that institutions demand from their staff. Secondly, for business institutions where extended working hours is necessary, a gym facility should be established and employees to be provided with an exercise break on daily basis. As a result, the company’s personnel would be more likely to release work pressure, become fitter and healthier and job performance would be improved in return.
In conclusion, Although the approach of extended work hours has led many people to give up exercising, the problem can be handled by legally forcing employers to reduce work time or to equip premises with sports equipment and offer employees an exercising break.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43055555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84174396753 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7381030761 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.181818182 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353085605466 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117607408568 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553429837366 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208139526334 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399624441471 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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