You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the laptop I have purchased one week ago at your main store in midtown.
Firstly, after only two days of using the laptop, the WIFI adapter was suddenly disabled. When I tried to follow the troubleshooting instructions, the system did not respond and showed a pop-up window with a message of “Enable the WIFI connection” repeatedly.
Since I work as a freelance translator, my work depends mainly on sending the translated materials to the clients via email on specified deadlines. Unfortunately, I have been unable to meet the deadline of my translation projects and tasks for a whole weak; consequently, I am afraid this might affect my reputation negatively since it is causing inconvenience to my customers.
Although I called the customer support department, I have not received any sensible answer. As a result, I hope you can settle this matter by sending me a replacement for the deficit laptop or to have it fixed as soon as possible.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention.
Yours faithfully,
Asser
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urgent attention. Yours faithfully, Asser
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, as a result, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23626373626 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25874206266 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1420136432 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194619920119 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786061031468 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540352786645 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098862422542 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505131894922 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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