Many working people get little ot no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many workin people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
The internet and technology has brought myriad work opportunities and prosperity, albeit at the cost of health. Nowadays working people merely get time to exercise due to their busy routine and exorbitant stress. In this essay I shall throw a light on causes of this notion and propose some solutions to amilorate this.
To begin with, despite of any occupassion every person in working class has to contribute majority of his/her time to worklife. In addition to office duties, significant amount of time is wasted in office commute which gives almost no time to individule to spend on personal health. The survey conducted by 'Start TV' shows that more than 90% of people in Mumbai could not find time for exercise due to their job responsibilities and hectic schedules. Considering this fact, excessive work load is a major reason for the lack of exercise.
Furthermore, a lack of awareness of fitness is another reason behind the low exercise rate. Due to frivolity towards the importance of health, people are reluctant to do exercise during their free time or holidays. The paper of Dr. Cooper, the founder of the Health Center, evidently proves that awareness in this matter strongly motivate people towards regular physical workout and lack of it promotes reluctantness for physical movement. Seen under this light, uninformed attitude for exercise contributes significantly for poor health.
However, despite of aforementioned reasons, there are variety of ways to battle with this problems. One of the options is to provide chargeless gym facilities near office premises so that employees can avail it's benefits. Secondly, organizing sports activities or marathon events either in officies or social gathering centers which is like an exercise in disguize. Lastly, arrange councilling and informative programs about importance of physical health and its relation to regular exercise.
To sum up, although lack of exercise adversly affects physical health of working class, if above measures are taken situation will surely improve in coming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, as to, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39692307692 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82297589423 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624615384615 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6671674643 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282020968693 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872476710606 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683991037591 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146162430335 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564049841111 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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