Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
it’s argued that both sexes are not able to perform the same duties and tasks at home and in day to day routine life. I disagree with this statement, as both genders can perform each other works as effectively as performed by the opposite sex. The essay will discuss how both sexes can able to perform their opposite sex work and responsibilities equally.
In the modern era, both genders are equally responsible for their daily routine work. firstly, both parents are working nowadays in a multinational organization where the work is not assigned based on gender. men and woman share equal workload and tasks to complete their work. secondly, nowadays, women are getting the opportunities to work in the nation’s police force nowadays where they perform the same duties as efficiently handle by the men. For example, in a recent article published by the time magazine that 95% of women can deliver the same task in corporate as effectively performed by the men.
On household duties, both sexes are equally responsible for their tasks. In ancient times, women need to cook food for their family members, however, in the 21st century, both men and women do the cooking depends on their time available for family and their children. also, we see many men are taking part in cooking shows to show their talent, which proves that women can take rest when they are not in a good mood to cook or not well. For example, survey statistics show that 95% of both sexes share their responsibilities equally to run their family.
To sum up, there is no gender discrimination on the job duties and responsibilities for both sexes. As men and women are equally sharing their workplace duties and household responsibilities.
it’s argued that both sexes are not able to perform the same duties and tasks at home and in day to day routine life. I disagree with this statement, as both genders can perform each other works as effectively as performed by the opposite sex. The essay will discuss how both sexes can able to perform their opposite sex work and responsibilities equally.
In the modern era, both genders are equally responsible for their daily routine work. firstly, both parents are working nowadays in a multinational organization where the work is not assigned based on gender. men and woman share equal workload and tasks to complete their work. secondly, nowadays, women are getting the opportunities to work in the nation’s police force nowadays where they perform the same duties as efficiently handle by the men. For example, in a recent article published by the time magazine that 95% of women can deliver the same task in corporate as effectively performed by the men.
On household duties, both sexes are equally responsible for their tasks. In ancient times, women need to cook food for their family members, however, in the 21st century, both men and women do the cooking depends on their time available for family and their children. also, we see many men are taking part in cooking shows to show their talent, which proves that women can take rest when they are not in a good mood to cook or not well. For example, survey statistics show that 95% of both sexes share their responsibilities equally to run their family.
To sum up, there is no gender discrimination on the job duties and responsibilities for both sexes. As men and women are equally sharing their workplace duties and household responsibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It&apos
it's argued that both sexes are not able t...
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...sponsible for their daily routine work. firstly, both parents are working nowadays in a...
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...e work is not assigned based on gender. men and woman share equal workload and task...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...kload and tasks to complete their work. secondly, nowadays, women are getting the opport...
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...vailable for family and their children. also, we see many men are taking part in coo...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...sponsible for their daily routine work. firstly, both parents are working nowadays in a...
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Suggestion: Men
...e work is not assigned based on gender. men and woman share equal workload and task...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...kload and tasks to complete their work. secondly, nowadays, women are getting the opport...
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Suggestion: Also
...vailable for family and their children. also, we see many men are taking part in coo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2872.0 1615.20841683 178% => OK
No of words: 582.0 315.596192385 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93470790378 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79327545809 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.250859106529 0.561755894193 45% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 506.74238477 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5826300521 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03571428571 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1540020989 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657507640538 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034160004581 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102637441634 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00755052349126 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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