Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle.
Nowadays, it is becoming a trend that people like to shop online. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first outline advantages of an online shopping then present a disadvantage.
Some people think that buying things online such as tickets, books and even grocery would help them to save time. People now live in nuclear families; hence, they do not get time to go for grocery shopping as both of the partners, particularly husband and wife, work. For example, the number of working women is increasing, so they look for option that can save their time as now women do not get time at home and to go for grocery themselves.
Other than that, online shopping gives many options to buy items. Buying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a lesser price. For example, a new person can easily find a book in a new city than finding a book store.
On the other hand, people get shocked while receiving wrong or bad-quality product. But, in most of the cases, the e-commerce takes this matter seriously and carefully verifies these sellers. For instance, on AliBaba.com, each and every seller has to be verified and reviewed.
To conclude, online shopping is a great innovation for people who work full-time. It saves time and cost at the same time. Hence, most of the times, online shopping is a smooth experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81707317073 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48026115951 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4707832794 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0114203413913 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00451601986965 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0125338572437 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0061146358683 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00785056144008 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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