Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the children receive far less attention as compared to the kids in the past due to the time constraints of their parents. It is agreed that most of the parents spare little time to spend with their children. This essay will also explain the different reasons for this and how it impacts the lives of the children.
To begin with, people are mostly busy with their jobs in today's modern world due to this fast paced work environment. Also, everyone wants to succeed in their profession which leads them to spend extra hours at workplace . For instance, employees in Apple work from morning to late night so that they can be bestowed with extraordinary achievements. As a result of this, these people might end up devoting minimal time towards the welfare of their kids.
Furthermore, people like to relax and enjoy with their friends during the leisure time which refrains them to have enough time for their kids. On the same note, a part of population spend part of the weekend cooking and preparing enough meals for the week ahead. For example, the survey performed by UCLA showed that the parents who work extra hours in a day hardly pay attention to either the school work or the personal life of their children. So, a student might end up scoring far less grades than expected in his school.
Thus, with above in mind, it can be concluded that the parents who consume the majority of the day at the office have a nominal time to look after their children. In addition, the study and habits of the small kids might also get impacted as a result of this behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun grades is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... So, a student might end up scoring far less grades than expected in his school. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67142857143 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33460636936 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9560093994 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284413156427 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105290205088 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896437327466 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189283924431 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789721032436 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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