Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Poverty, as we all know, is one of the uprising problems in the modern world. According to a survey
in the British Journal, there is about 40 percent of the world's population impacted by poverty. There are different causes of poverty which I have discussed below with various solutions.
To begin with, the primary reason for poverty is the unemployment throughout the world which ultimately leads to a lack of money. On the same note, the career opportunities for these people in developing countries are nominal with a lot of competition among a single job vacancy. Furthermore, another reason for this problem is that some people beg for money on roads rather than willing to work so that they can at least have food on their table.
The possible solutions to this problem need to be discussed and implemented by the local
government. Also, there should be data extraction from the census to compare the poverty
level percentages between years. In this way, the government should be able to know the severity of
the problem in order to exert different methodologies to overcome this. On the other hand, the
local bodies need to encourage industrial growth in the area which would eventually benefit these poor people with
employment opportunities.
In the end, we can conclude that poverty is one of the most severe issues in the modern world.
However, this can be tackled by implementing different types of efficient measures which have been
proved already in other developed countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: Did you mean ''?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, at least, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09638554217 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75057892533 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6195106333 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230053522485 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073758602211 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424017182129 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596368180839 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576701836353 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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