In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends.
Why has this change occurred?
Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?
In modern days, young people tend to spend their time with friends rather than with their close relatives. The major reason for that is that adults are much busier these days than in the past and dedicate too little time to their children. I believe that making minors do something against their will is a useless approach. However, I think that parents should encourage youngsters to be more home-loving persons by spending more quality time together.
In the modern world, adolescents tend to spend more time with their peers because parents are usually busy at work and fail to establish strong trustful relationships with their offsprings. As a result, children lose close connection with their parents and have no desire to be around them and spend time at home. A recent study found that only 15% of children whose parents work long hours prefer to spend their free time at home, while the dramatic 85% of teenagers would prefer going out with friends instead of being around their hard-working parents.
However, I am inclined to believe that parents should not apply strict rules which would require their offsprings to stay at home as it may cause emotional insecurity in them. I believe that parents must engage teenagers in some interesting activities or set out for a journey together in order to build a strong family bond between them and to encourage children to stay at home more often. For instance, the results of the survey, conducted in Boston High School, showed that 89% of teenagers would gladly stay at home more if they had closer relations with their parents.
To conclude, nowadays young adults prefer to spend their spare time with friends instead of their families. In my opinion, the main reason for that is the overall parent’s busyness which incapacitates them to build healthy strong relationships with their children. However, there is no reason to try to make minors do something against their desire. The best decision in tackling this problem would be for parents to set aside more time for their offsprings and spend it doing bond-building activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01714285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52519710283 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511428571429 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2396154917 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.550740843127 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222415243851 0.084324248473 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105977427436 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.378363089609 0.151304729494 250% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110604647677 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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