Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Wealth indisputably is one of the most fancy human invention, which has proven to be of greatest value, despite all other human assets. "Money cannot buy happiness", this statement has proven to be misguiding in today's self-oriented society. In apropos to the previous statement, few individuals hold a firm believe that currency is the one element that matters the most, whose importance overshadows everything else in society.
Generally speaking, in this competitive era nothing is free of cost. Even though, relationships are weighed on caliber of wealth you behold. As said "excess of everything is bad", we humans have implemented this concept in an extremely inappropriate way. On the other hand, currency should be utilised in some pragmatic manner such as, excess cash should be donated to charities, NGO's and organisations supporting humanity in any aspect. In addition, society owners should put an effort to collect money from citizens and in turn facilitate them with best possible security systems. Furthermore, instead of practising habit of spending valuable currency on unnecessary tasks, we should value it and adopt a pragmatic approach to overcome major flaws faced by community.
Human population today have perceived an extremely devastating concept, that wealth represents happiness in life. However, this a completely impractical approach; a successful and blessed life depends upon various other key elements. For instance, the love and support you receive from your family members and spouse. The beautiful moments you cherish and the quality time you spend with your loved ones. Followed by your satisfaction level, aims, expectations from life. Moreover, your optimistic approach towards life, a healthy and sound lifestyle and utilising your cash in best possible way to gain knowledge and broaden your approach of mind to what life has to offer us.
In conclusion, inevitably this is a controversial statement that wether wealth plays crucial role in human life or not. Indeed, the benefits of wealth cannot be overshadowed, but to utilise this blessing in most appropriate manner is the real challenge faced by humans. Adopting balanced strategy is the key to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
...human invention, which has proven to be of greatest value, despite all other human assets. ...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...om citizens and in turn facilitate them with best possible security systems. Furthermore,...
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Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...sound lifestyle and utilising your cash in best possible way to gain knowledge and broa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51020408163 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00305697535 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626822157434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3446677007 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147327659822 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406822837103 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296775424489 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786012486083 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428215669695 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.