Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?
" World revolves around money" is an irrefutable fact. If properly spent, money can establish most of the things needed for an acceptable life. Relationships and health are equitably significant.
The world has moved away from barter system and deals only in currency. Right from children toys to expensive cars to homes, everything can be purchased if we are wealthy. That is the reason the rich and affluent community have better standards of living when compared to middle-class and poor. However, splashing out on extravagances is not considered ideal. The savings and earnings should be spent wisely on building a brighter future for them and their offsprings such as providing better standards of education for children or investing on properties or spending them on healthcare. Also, develop the habit of giving back to society through donations or feeding the destitute with surplus.
Apart from having satisfactory financial life, it is pivotal to have social relationships and healthy lifestyle. Though money can buy a lot of things, it seldom provides you health and friends. Human interactions and face-to-face communications are what forms a community. Friends, family and acquaintances give us moral support and sense of security which is irreplaceable. Would you be able to buy a shoulder to cry on ? Definitely NO. Similarly, when it comes to health, we cannot buy a healthy heart or body. It is exercise and nutritious diet that keeps one fit. Hence, there are some facets of life which are also valuable.
To conclude, money should be utilised in proper fashion for necessities and living. In addition,Relations and health are also key for a comfortable lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Relations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, similarly, so, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09080627467 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.045706231 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5789473684 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2105263158 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128334454435 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331175153189 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402145246696 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840348988537 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441494230112 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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