more and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
obesity has been considered as the mother of diseases. Thus, some people believe that by controlling the price of fat containing food products the increase in weight can be reduced. In my opinion there are multiple other factors that needs to be addressed to solve this problem. I will discuss them one by one in detail.
To begin with, sports facilities and installation of exercise equipment will offer a chance to mitigate the risks associated with obesity. For example, If the citizens are motivated to adopt a health lifestyle and do regular exercise. it can be done by taking the advantage of nearby sports club or gym. The more they would join these centers the better would be the chances to maintain their weight.
Secondly, obese people should be encouraged to eat organic food rather than eating unhealthy canned food. Since the consumption of raw vegetable and fruits can control cholesterol level and reduces their weight tremendously.
Moreover, citizens should be encouraged to walk for going to school, college or at work. For instance, in china and Japan the bicycle ride is quite trendy among citizens. they use bicycle at work or school, no matter either someone is rich or poor.
On the flip side, although the price hike on fat food products can be a deterrent for suppressing their consumption, however their must be a check and balance on the production of fat containing food products. Furthermore, the consumption of high cholesterol containing food products can be dropped by lowering down the import of these products.
To summarise, in my opinion there are multiple other ways to cut the weight. however, it is the need of the hour to think rationally about the consequences of eating unhealthy food products. obesity, now a days is a dilemma that every country of this world has been going through. Hence, the higher authorities should sit together for thinking the ways mitigating the risks associated with it. Otherwise, the day wouldn't be far when every person will suffer with high cholesterol, obesity, and heart related diseases, altogether.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08720930233 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72894367581 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572674418605 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6277981357 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124045632458 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341631997126 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445112998776 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659231046775 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566733728384 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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