More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this development have more advantages over disadvantages?
Growing affluence has led people to consume more fast food and live sedentary life. This trend of pre-cooked meal is the quickest way to suffice the hunger but it is unhealthy and root cause of various diseases. However, cooking fresh food required time but it is a healthy diet. It is agreed that drawbacks of ready-made meal outweighs its benefits.
To start with, the popularity of instant food in increasing rapidly due to the reason that it is the fastest way to grab the meal and eat it. Admittedly, in this fast-paced world people have less time for cooking and household chores. According to a survey, on average working people have only two to three hours of quality time available after work which they usually prefer to spend it with family instead of cooking. This paradigm shift in approach led people to consume ready meals and has pushed them on verge on chronic illness such as diabetes, hypertension and heart diseases. Undoubtedly, these meals have unsaturated sugar and fat. Moreover, daily consumption is injurious to health. The recent empirical results of a study revealed that average age of people living in USA is just 50 years as compared to Pakistan which is 65. The underlying reason is higher consumption of ready meals in USA.
On contrary to this, fresh food is indeed a healthy option because of the fact that these foods contain less calories and therefore are not hazardous to health. The renowned dietician, Momal Asif in an interview said that fresh food is the healthy option and person consuming on daily basis have only 15% of chances to get diabetes and hypertension which is relatively low as compared to ready meal that is 75% however, this healthy option is a time consuming effort. In order to cook food on daily basis, individuals require almost two hours which is a challenge in hectic busy schedules.
To conclude, although both fresh food and ready meals have their own pros and cons but health is the major concern which is above all. Hence, the disadvantages due to ready-meals are far greater than its accessibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89518413598 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59932574223 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3783997712 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28761777675 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858423688513 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554447023529 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176693474063 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048979144585 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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