More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the
first time.
What problems does this cause?
What do you think are some possible solutions?
An increasing number of people in developing nations are making their first car purchases. The principle problem it invites can be traffic congestion and the most viable solution to it is better public transport.
To begin with, the primary dilemma developing countries face when their citizens start to buy cars is traffic jams. This is because people's wealth has grown faster than the infrastructure and this means that roads that were meant for the bike are now clogged up with the queue of lots of cars. Bangalore city, for instance, was first meant to build for two-wheelers only but now 5000 cars duly added every month on their roads making it congested with every passing day. As a result, people get stuck for prolonged hours during the rush periods and it also affects individuals in emergencies as well.
A possible solution to it can be the betterment of the existing transport system. This would solve the prominent concerns by taking people off the roads and make them traveling in a group and leaving the roads with much less private vehicles. As traffic issues increase, people tend to think to sell their cars or use it when necessary. Lucknow city, for example, is introducing their first metro line which can cater 5000 people at a time and are projected to reduce journey time by up to 50% when it will be completed.
In conclusion, although the significant issue of traffic congestion is the surge in the number of cars which clog up the roads but it can be addressed easily through the modern and sustainable transport system.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87969924812 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55069023812 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6792157411 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169624572634 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069078596013 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228730714369 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997712760248 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459845642712 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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