Overseas studies after completion of schooling is becoming first priority of many students, these days, and although it has some drawbacks, benefits are rather more.
Certain merits of the same are as follows: The first and foremost is that, it makes students more bold and independent.To explain, when they live at the distances of thousands of miles they have to manage their accommodation expenses, electricity bills, water bills , grocery bills, and many more, and that makes them more responsible, and practical. What is more, their horizon get broaden in many ways. To elaborate it, their international graduate certificate makes ways for them to get employed in well-established firm anywhere in the world, as this is undeniably in the utmost demand these days. Furthermore, their encounter with people having dissimilar view points towards life make them more tolerant as they learn to embrace each possible situation in their lives, and they have been proved less biased and more open to acceptance, in an international survey.Hence, unless they go to overseas for further study they may not experience any benefits mentioned above.
On the contrary, the prime drawback is the culture shock. Put simply, due to immigration in different country they experience unfamiliar ways of leading life, and differences either in food culture or dressing or any other aspects of life, and they cannot cope with, initially. Apart from that, homesickness is again the second biggest disadvantage. As they are accustomed to sick help every now and then from their family members and all of sudden when they do not find the same in overseas they become depressed and anxious. However, these drawbacks are not that severe since with passing time they learn to get used to with situation.
To draw an inference, in spite of few drawbacks, benefits are comparatively more as they become self-sufficient, open-minded, and capable of getting employment in any corner of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
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Suggestion: Hence
... acceptance, in an international survey.Hence, unless they go to overseas for further...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to sicking'.
Suggestion: accustomed to sicking
...econd biggest disadvantage. As they are accustomed to sick help every now and then from their fami...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, well, apart from, as for, in spite of, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25949367089 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91177958111 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598101265823 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.610311534 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.090909091 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170272689567 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642013116755 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534877585515 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108949405256 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048750520915 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.