Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people argue that youngsters with the age of 18 should be allowed to drive a car, while other believe that the drivers should be a minimum of 25 years of age. Although driving a car for youngsters has a lot of benefits, this essay believes that driving should only be allowed when you grow older.
On the one hand, a youngster can bring a lot of benefits to himself and his/her family by driving. First of all, it will be easier for a youngster to commute to college and he/she does not have to stand in long queues for public transportation. This means he/she will easily reach in time to attend the classes and this will improve his/her punctuality. Furthermore, he/she can take his/her parents to anywhere they wish to and help them in the household things while the parents can rest in their old age. For example, parents will be in comfort when their son/daughter is helping them in monthly grocery, any trip to any event or occasion etc. However, despite the above argument, I believe that youngster should not be allowed to drive.
On the other hand, drivers with the age of 25 can bring in a lot of maturity and caution which is necessary for safety of the driver and other passengers. This means that drivers of this age will be more patient and will not indulge themselves in any road races with other cars while youngsters often get involved in car racing due to their aggression and immaturity which can result in accidents. Moreover, they will be more aware of the road hazards and speed limits which will be beneficial for the safety of the driver and other passengers on the road. For example, it was reported in ‘Gulf News’ that 60 out of 80 accidents in 2017 in Dubai were caused by drivers aging between 18 to 24 due to careless driving and over speeding. Based on the above argument, I believe that drivers should only be allowed to drive with a minimum age of 25 years.
In conclusion, although driving in young age can bring a lot of advantages, I believe that road and passengers safety should be preferred and hence, drivers should only be allowed to drive when they grow at least 25 years old so that they can bring in maturity and safety while driving.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59898477157 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46351929375 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428934010152 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7200075761 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296476177687 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124126982762 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110762202515 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231812278595 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104406375939 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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