Most people in the world need to work in order to lead a decent life or even just to survive. Many workers are motivated by money: if the job pays well, they are willing to do it. However, some people are not concerned with the size of their pay packet: they simply enjoy their job and choose to do it whether they earn a high salary or not. What is more important – salary or job satisfaction? Discuss and give reasons for your answer.
There is always a heated debate whether job should be well-paid or interest oriented. Some people prefer highly paid jobs, while others prefer the job of their interest. While I cannot negate the importance of high wage job, in my opinion job satisfaction still remains to be the top priority. I shall elaborate my stance with valid arguments and examples.
To embark upon, evidently job satisfaction increases productivity. People feel motivated, self-driven and work with dedication. A person who find his work interesting does not require micro management and would excel in his work by his own will that will eventually lead him to vertical movements in the organization. For instance, Steve Jobs was a tech savvy person and loved to innovate things. Thus he was a successful person and is considered to be the father of apple world.
On the contrary, people who choose well paid job initially finds Is very appealing but on the later stage they get into trouble of managing the expectations and lacks creativity and perfection. The fulfillment of job requirements creates trouble not only in their professional life but also at personal level. For instance, job in technology are considered to be highly paid, yet they are very challenging and demanding but least or no work life balance. A person might be able to fulfill all the financial requirements of his family but would not be personally available to cherish those moments together.
To recapitulate the argument, salary element holds its significance but job satisfaction outweighs when it comes to productivity, innovation and willingness. In the future, it is expected to see a major shift in opting to desirable jobs instead of highly paid jobs in the market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97441647094 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3289228525 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175266565801 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609748902606 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379698395058 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104407991076 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242611644797 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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