Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.
Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Music is considered as the foods for our souls and its relationship with human race is so intense that we cannot think of a single country or society that does not have its own music. Music is related to our relaxation, our festival, our national pride, prayer, celebration and many important aspects of our personal and social life. Socially and individually, music is listened by everyone as many claim that it can only benefit them but many others opine this and believe that it also has deteriorating effects on the former. Both the notions are scrutinised in the following paragraph followed by personal opinion.
Undoubtedly, music is best way to express anything as listeners are able to connect better when they are hearing the same in musical tone. Furthermore, songs and music can also help individuals to learn better. To substantiate it, rhymes are used in the primary schools so that kids can learn new alphabets and numbers. Socially, the national anthem- which is also a music- is revered by all the countrymen and inspires people. Music is a part of prayer in any religions and cultures.
However, modern music which is also referred as loud music is baseless and is just noise. They used plethora of instruments but everything in vain. As a society, we have to respect everyone and music should also be developed in the same way, however, this is missing in modern songs and attack to others with their songs. For illustrations, many punjabi songs promote guns and pit fights and they also have objectified women which is a black mark on our society.
Having dwelled on such thoughts it can easily be said that music has no boundaries- it lives beyond ages and borders. I believe that music is helping to connect different societies and has done a commendable job. But music creators should also develop some sense of responsibility and should not disgrace anyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: MANY_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...ually, music is listened by everyone as many claim that it can only benefit them but many ...
Line 1, column 601, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
... in the following paragraph followed by personal opinion. Undoubtedly, music is best way to e...
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...personal opinion. Undoubtedly, music is best way to express anything as listeners ar...
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rs are able to connect better when they are hearing the same in musical tone. Furthermore, ...
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...usic can also help individuals to learn better. To substantiate it, rhymes are used in...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.909375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68895127966 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3037055692 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27403892216 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923263960054 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546723419636 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167725132318 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269146151198 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.