Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?
In the ancient times, books were the prime source of knowledge as well as they also entertain the readers. However, with the rise of the internet and technology, a segment of society believes that technology is overwhelming books due to which books are not seen as the fruitful source. My conviction is the same which is supported in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, the knowledge on the internet is vast and easy to access in comparison to the books in which the information is limited. In the case of books, if we have doubts while reading, either we have to consult experts or search on the internet. To substantiate it, In Australia, 90% of students prefer to read things online instead of books as they find them disdain and spurn them.
Even though great stories are printed in books, people are heading towards cinemas and other ways for their entertainment. Nowadays, directors make movies on such novels due to which it is not essential to read them. Furthermore, people are more obsessed with their health and in order to keep them fit, they choose games and sports as it is the good way to entertain and fulfill other desires. On top of it, it is arduous to give time to books as people have their schedules hectic and during their leisure time, it is imperative for them to choose cyberspace.
Having dwelled on such thoughts it is clear that world wide web, games and movies are epitome for knowledge and entertainment, while books are outdated for this purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80155642023 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.628455791 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0250272496 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120621480516 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452013295093 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032684268709 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710125572253 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120335241837 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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