n many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Apropos to the numerous studies conducted in 2016 globally, estimated 49% upsurge has been reported in rate of illegal activities. Which consistently are rising with the passage of time, ultimately raising the sense of terror and insecurity among citizens. The fundamental factors involved are low literacy and employment ratio, psychological issues and being in a company of culprits. In order to curtail this percentage different strategies can be implemented demanding support from government, citizens, health and education sectors.
Various key elements are responsible for excessive rise in unlawful acts. Firstly, low literacy and employment levels of a community makes it prone to financial sufferings. Indisputably leaving no choice for individuals and they find this path much easier and beneficent for fulfilling their requirements. Secondly, enormous number of people suffer from psychological problems such as depression and anxiety. Which has profound and detrimental effects on their social and personal life. Ultimately, few of such categories of citizens shift towards drug addiction while remaining get involved in criminal activities leading to disastrous effects on society. For example, roughly estimating about 35% of American population who are mentally distressed end up behind the bars because of committing a serious offence.
Furthermore, a variety of policies and strategies should be introduced globally to mitigate this issue. On the one hand, government should take this problem into consideration and adopt pragmatic approaches such as supporting homeless communities in all possible manners and fortify their rights. On the other hand, health organisations particularly rehabilitation centres should actively contribute by playing their role. They should facilitate patients suffering from psychotic illness and motivate them to lead a healthy, happy and normal life. However, educational department in collaboration with parents should monitor a child's attitude, interests and his social activities followed by developing awareness among right and wrong paths. For instance, in my personal experience one of my classmate indulged himself in illegal actions and killed his neighbour and ended up being jailed for 10 years.
On concluding, in my stance this is worldwide dilemma and can be tackled sensibly through collaboration of higher authorities, individuals themselves and few organisations. Although this is a tough and time consuming task but slowly and steadily it can be achieved and hence proportions of unlawful acts can be mitigated from our society leading to a safe and secure future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80670103093 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10283054514 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649484536082 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8072767706 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.578947368 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111847306758 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308180506621 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293687326907 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697617544836 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236182052651 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 78.4519038076 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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