New parents should attend parenting courses to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Cultivating an outstanding child is the dream of every parent, which naturally leads us to question whether attending professional courses to learn how to bring up children is necessary for new mothers and fathers. I believe they do not need to take such classes.
Initially, comparing with attending courses, new parents have better choices, their own parents, to teach and help them raise children. Because grandparents of children had spent decade years on bringing up their children, they have rich associated hands-on experience which can be imparted to new parents. Moreover, it is very convenient for new parents to consult children’s grandparents since they can live together. In this way, whenever there are some problems occurring, a helping hand will be given by their grandparents instantly, which cannot be achieved by the teachers or lecturers in parenting courses. Therefore, it is unnecessary to waste money in attending such courses.
Furthermore, parenting classes provide general training instead of personalized services, which has little help on new parents. In order to cater for every people’s taste, training agencies only offer standard curriculum and teach their students, new parents, standard knowledge. For example, parents who have their children for the first time will be instructed the method about how to teach children to speak and informed the average age at which children begin to speak. That knowledge cannot satisfy unique needs of different children and help parents discover their children’s potential that needs to be developed.
In conclusion, considering that new parents have better alternative sources of parenting courses, and such training has drawbacks itself, I strongly advocate that there is no need for new parents to participate in parenting classes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58992805755 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96324289365 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9819151535 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33927947033 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131099040285 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713480004463 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229531598187 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289912201965 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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