New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Unarguably, lifestyles of people has been changed greatly by technical advancements in these days. It is provided that ways of running commercial activities has altered the lives of customers. While i believe that online shopping is much more popular nowadays, still people prefer to visit superstores to ensure buying good quality products. In this essay both trends will be covered.
On the one hand, Modern ways of buying and selling has huge implications for the well-being of society. Firstly, Today most of the activities are automatic as today people have an option to buy things like clothes, electronic gadgets using various applications in their personal phones. Therefore, they are able to save travel expenses and precious time which they might spend on other important projects. Secondly, In the contemporary era, purchasing things being at home allows people to possess items that they can not buy through visiting supermarkets which are located in remote areas. For example, For a few people it is inconvenient to go physically to buy stuff; however, they can easily order on the website of the company without any efforts. Hence, it has become an attractive option for those individuals.
Finally, along with buying, it is preferable now to sell online as advertising products online let the general public know about range of products and they can earn as much profit as they want by posting product information on Facebook, Instagram or Youtube. To exemplify, A person who wants to sell second hand car which is otherwise quite difficult, whereas, giving adds would be a best to sell the vehicle.
On the other hand, whether it requires time and effort to visit stores to buy or sell anything, but it has far more benefits. First of all, if people acquire things via visiting malls or super centres, they can cheque the quality of goods that will not only make the deal more effective but also let you invest money on long lasting items. It has been seen that sometimes when people purchase online they do not feel satisfied due to damage, wrong size or quantity. So, it is more convenient than online transactions. Additionally, shipping cost involved in online shopping is more than the travelling expenses we bear to visit a store. That is why, it is better to make efforts to go to visit where you can touch the product and also bargain with the seller to adjust price instead of spending money on poor quality products.
To conclude, Although due to having internet access majority of people tend to buy things using company websites, i think that buying things by actually visiting the store is virtually significant in order to make sure we are investing money on top quality commodities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 455.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99120879121 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63914774752 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.858833124 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.526315789 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9473684211 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117891789577 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375283102093 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330960748778 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651662952524 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120083520156 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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