New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today’s age, buying and selling using technology has immensely changed the lives of its users. I completely agree with the statement as for buyers it has increased their efficiency, while for sellers it has created a medium through which they can target their audience efficiently with lesser overhead cost.
To begin with, the technology and e-commerce have created convenience for buyers and sellers. In early days, purchasing products from the markets was quite hectic as people have to physically visit mall and markets to purchase goods which used to take a lot of time and energy but now with the help of technology they can purchase products online. To illustrate this, lots of products which were not available easily before are now available online and the purchaser can buy them online and they can also pay them via online banking without physically visiting the banks. Thus, the technology has created virtual stores through which the buyers can purchase the goods conveniently saving their lots of time, energy and efficiency.
With respect to the seller’s point of view, the technology is playing a very crucial role. Firstly, technology is providing a digital platform to the retailers though which they can sell their goods online. Recently, companies such as Google, Facebook , Instagram and many more like them are providing customized pages to the sellers, where they can easily approach their buyers . Secondly, the overhead cost also reduced significantly as the merchants do not need to pay for the rent and other utilities of maintaining physical premises. Finally, overall visibility of the products also increases as shoppers can easily approach them on their Web and Facebook pages.
In conclusion, the various benefits that the technology has brought for the seller and buyers are immense such as decreasing overhead cost and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30536912752 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68065290554 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4947742071 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108810755247 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497860025951 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343798729109 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778139166835 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035661312206 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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