Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council , in your letter
• give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
• explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
• describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to raise my concern regarding our sports and leisure center, which is being considered to close down soon by the local council. It is to bring it in your knowledge that I along with my family and friends use this park on daily basis. Infact, it is a central point where I meet my friends to socialize and share our daily life stories. Moreover, we also do some physical activities over there in order to remain healthy.
The sports and leisure center is playing a very crucial role in the development of physical and mental health of the local community. The sports center is used by all age group throughout the day for various purposes such as for meeting with someone and doing physical exercise to maintain their health. Furthermore, this is the only sports and leisure center in our vicinity with huge influx of local community.
If the center is closed then the local public will be deprived of the sports center and there will be no place where the locals can meet with their friends and share their daily stories in order to socialize and do physical exercises simultaneously. Thus, it might become the reason of increasing stress level in people which possibly may lead to severe diseases like heart stroke, kidney and lungs failure.
I believe this question needs your close consideration.
Yours faithfully
Jeetender
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87124463519 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50307699901 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.462743949 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314659261784 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117610500558 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713852593021 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173968762958 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398332642014 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.