You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there.
Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and your family
• Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
• Give your preference for the location of the accommodation
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
To Whom it May Concern,
I am writing to inquire you regarding the house which I am looking for my family on rent.
My name is Jeetender Kumar and I am from Pakistan. I’ve recently received transfer letter from my employer stating that I’ll be joining their office in Canada as one of their employee has just resigned from their office and they want with me to replace him. As I am asked to join by 1st of March, 2020 so, I’ll shift along with my spouse and two daughters so I need a house on rent a.
As I have a nuclear family So I am looking for a medium size house which should contain two living rooms, one drawing and television room along with car parking space and a small garden as I am fond of planting different trees and looking after them.
I prefer house near to downtown so that I could conveniently move around the city and since my wife is the one who always do groceries for our house so there should be a grocery market near to it so that, my wife can easily go there. Furthermore, there should be a cinema near to it as I spent my weekends by watching movies in the cinema. I am hoping that you could help me in searching out a decent house.
I am look forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Yours faithfully
Jeetender
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2020'.
Suggestion: March 2020
...ce him. As I am asked to join by 1st of March, 2020 so, I'll shift along with my spous...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...two daughters so I need a house on rent a. As I have a nuclear family So I am l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40833333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40528570144 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7713488223 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153655343029 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071388752726 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585097691151 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811758190872 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607140542443 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.