Although most people are richer than in the past; modern life seems very stressful, and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of stress in modern life, and how could stress be reduced?
Recently it has been observed that more and more people are suffering from stress out conditions. While many people are now wealthier compare to their previous time, their current life seems to be much stressful and individuals facing the stress out conditions are growing in numbers. This is mainly because of the extended working hours and lack of doing physical exercises. However, the solutions to overcome this issue are to create more recreational centers monitoring of working hours.
One of the primary reasons of this is that people spend their most of the day time working in the offices .They work too hard to attain their different financial goals. As their objective is to get more power and wealth so they sits longer in office to get promotions and perquisites which results in high mental pressure. Another reason is that people tend to spend lesser time going to physical activity centers such as public parks, gym and yoga centers. As they tend to remain busy in their daily life doing multiple works to gain more money so, they often not visit such places to relax them. Consequently, their mental health become poor.
To tackle this issue , the average working hours spent in the office by the individuals should be strictly monitored and this could be done through the biometric machines installed in the office premises. Moreover, those companies and individuals who breach this policy should be penalised. Furthermore, recreational centers such as parks ,gyms and yoga centers should be built So that people can go there and spend their times doing various physicals exercises .This way the overall health of the individuals would improve.
To conclude that , difficult working hours and not spending much time on recreational activities are the primary reason of increasing stress in many people and to overcome this the government should adhere the individuals and organistion to adapt the state working hours policy. Apart of this , more public parks and activity centers should be construct so that people can spend their time in order to relax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51501622906 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6347378041 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142425447047 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572363851446 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632438851272 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103986267656 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681366263616 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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