University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
A Growing number of students are opting foreign countries for their tertiary studies. Although there are various benefits of studying abroad such as getting high pay salary when they return to their home country and getting a chance of settle down in abroad, there are few drawbacks that is expensive education along with difficult living conditions. In my opinion studying abroad opens new avenue and certainly outweigh the disadvantage.
First advantage of studying abroad is that the local students who qualified from abroad tend to be preferred by the local employers and they often get high remuneration jobs when they return to their home country. This is because sometimes the local employers believe that quality of education is far better in abroad countries. So, to attract them they offer higher pay. For example, a recent study of global consultancy E & Y suggest that in 2018 the average annual salary of foreign qualified graduates was 60% higher than local university graduates. Another benefit of studying abroad is that majority of countries offers permanent residency to the international students and subsequently citizenship after spending few more years. Thus making more favorable option for international student to study abroad rather than in their home country.
On the other hand, studying in foreign land would cost an individual much higher. To elaborate this , a student needs to pay full tuition fees, accommodation charges and flight cost which eventually will cost him more compare to if he study in his home country. For instance ,one recent study suggest that the average cost of two years masters program in Australia is 90,000 Australian dollars which is far expensive than if one study in his home country. In addition, living far away from home is also quite challenging as one can easily feel home-sickness and one has to do all his work like cooking, laundry and cleaning toilets which most of the individuals does not do at their home country. For this reasons, the majority of the students become reluctant to go abroad.
In conclusion, University students are increasingly studying abroad as their part of studies. While there are various problem studying in overseas universities like higher cost and hectic living conditions but the advantages like higher salary in their native country and chances of obtaining permanent residence and citizenship will motivate them to pursue their tertiary education in foreign land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30203045685 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71022896388 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0578683001 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5625 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287042387091 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117418205744 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905306152745 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19532972819 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357285193354 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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