Machines now play an important role in most people’s lives. Computers, cars and household machines (Such as washing machines) have become very common. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having so many machines in people’s lives? Use specific examples in your answer.
The impact of machines in our daily life is immeasurable. Although machines have made people’s life comfortable in every aspect such as saving time and raising the individual’s efficiency. However, there are a few drawbacks such as dependency on these gadgets and increased unemployment rate.
One of the most crucial role of the machines is that they save an individual’s time. Initially the jobs that human used to complete in days and in some conditions even in months have now been reduced and can be performed in minutes. To illustrate this, before the invention of computers, people used to record data on papers and preserving them was also time consuming and required many work force but after the invention of computers it has became very easy to store the data in the computer’s hard drive and large data can be secured for many years. As a result, people can now utilize their time efficiently.
On the contrary, there are few disadvantages of using machines frequently. Unemployment rate has been increased because of the increase in the machine usage. Earlier the task which was performed by many individuals can now be done with a single unit of machine which has caused many humans to loose their jobs. For instance, in a textile firm , which initially needed nine individuals to make a piece of cloth , now requires only three persons to perform the same task because of the machines which can perform sewing, threading tasks and printing tasks without needing further humans. Apart from this, dependency of these gadgets has also reduced individuals’ mental and cognitive thinking. For Example, children have now forgotten the basic mathematical calculations like addition, subtraction because of the calculators.
In conclusion, there are many benefits of using machines like saving time and increase human efficiency but besides that there are few negative aspects such as too much dependence on these gadgets has cause lack of mental and cognitive ability in humans and also increased unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25304878049 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01195810789 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2491748885 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30277251946 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116086772566 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756563487977 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189888347212 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598111953748 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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