Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
it is considered by the few people that death punishment should be given to the person who commits heinous crimes. while, others believe that in modern society the death penalty is intolerable. personally, I believe the death penalty should be enforced because it will prevent the further rise in crime and save the tax amount for better spending. (57 Words)
The death penalty can be considered unsuitable for many reasons. The strongest argument is that the innocent people could be wrongly convicted and executed. In a country where the judicial procedure takes several years to conclude a case, there is a chance that an honest and decent person could be executed or put behind bars until proven as an innocent person. another reason is that death penalty cannot deter the grave crimes as the criminals before committing a crime do not think rationally or consider the consequences of committing the crime. Thus, it does not bring the desired outcomes.
however, another view is that capital punishment is vital for the society. Firstly, it is an effective way of restraining major crimes. those offenders who are kept under prison will not be able to commit further crimes. Secondly, the tax payers’ hard earned money, which is saved from the prisoners’ budget can be spent on health, education and other productive work and finally, those criminals who perform fewer crimes would be afraid because of the punishment given to their fellow criminals. As a result, the overall crime rate can be reduced.
In conclusion, while one school of thought considers this act as inhuman and does not encourages this. however, the other school of thought positively reinforces this because of the various benefits. personally, I am in favour of the later view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1275862069 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67153266898 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4425313264 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243342333044 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809916915792 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774654475427 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142786592946 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895759299707 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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