News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Essay topics:

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

It is irrefutable, nowadays broadcast and TV channels are providing fake news mostly. Every people want to know whats happening surrounding us from their society, state, nation and world news in order to this many of them getting struggle to identify whether good news or bad news. This essay will drive how it is influencing to people in a bad manner.

Ancient generation people, there are very less media and television in order that they tried to provide actual news rather than imaginary news. In this modern generation, there are plethora of media and broadcast with the latest technologies which are producing to all the people. They are not providing accurate news due to heavy competition between them and they wanted increase the TRP rate based on that what they provide to people. For instance, I am the witness have seen one incident that flight was flying low circumstance and I was able to hear the louder noise later pilot has fixed that issue and it was flying proper circumstance luckily. When I was reading news paper at next day, Flight crashed due to engine problem and pilot got injured and admitted in hospital. These kind of fake news that I don't get trust to read the news paper.

In addition to this, every politician has their own television, they are always highlighting their own party news and they make it irrelevant news against other parties. For example, In my state, one of the party who has provided lot money to one or two leading media people before the election. Media was highlighting only good news about that particular party for the past 1 year due to that they have won the huge margin on election in order to this media always play a pivotal role to decide who is going to rule or who are all going to loss in election.

To summarise this, government has to involve and restrict some rules for all the broadcasts and government can able to revoke the licence that whoever create the fake news to make it interesting news.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...hannels are providing fake news mostly. Every people want to know whats happening sur...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... news mostly. Every people want to know whats happening surrounding us from their soc...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad manner" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...l drive how it is influencing to people in a bad manner. Ancient generation people, there ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun media is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...cient generation people, there are very less media and television in order that the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there are very less media and television in order that they tried to provide actu...
^^
Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ircumstance luckily. When I was reading news paper at next day, Flight crashed due to engi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...t got injured and admitted in hospital. These kind of fake news that I dont get trust to r...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 812, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ospital. These kind of fake news that I dont get trust to read the news paper. In...
^^^^
Line 3, column 839, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... news that I dont get trust to read the news paper. In addition to this, every politici...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70520231214 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44974889969 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4672460522 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.230769231 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249153938585 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952914126141 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607536570809 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160276161138 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605252470396 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.