News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.What is your opinion about this?
There is no doubt, nowadays, thanks to tecnology, that images are being used to express what words might not be able to do: be interpreted. It is the reason why newspapers and TV news use visual resources to get in touch with the audience in a more effective way. Thus essay will approach this matter and support the idea that pictures con be more pleasant than just words.
Although some may argue that imagination and creativity are necessary and develop it while reading, I defend the usage of visual information to auxiliate interpretation. With pictures, the texts are much easier and simpler to understand the message that is been tying to send to readers and, also, can be a great manner to start reading. For example, I love comic books and, when I was six years old, I receive my first comic which helped me to assimilate the history through the drawings since I was no able to capture the essence of the history only by its words.
In addition, it is a well-known fact that human brains respond better when estimulated which leads us to a highly chance to increase to the capacity of memorization thanks to photographs. A study conducted by students in many universities in recent years presented cases stating that a information is better retained with useful examples and pictures in order to clarify an argument or a lecture.
Therefore, I believe in the effectiveness of adverts, photos, images to enhance the amount of information to be storage because, today, we can access news much easier than before and this can be overflowing. Plus, these procedures are more suitable to understand and consume less time than interpreting a sentence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('chance') instead of another adjective.
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cent years presented cases stating that a information is better retained with use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87985865724 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80995389233 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2451209236 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154180231041 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597014164629 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592072363976 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875449538991 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687801293559 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.