During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a business man who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter with regards to the opportunity to work in your restaurant in London.
First, let me remind you who I am. On march 17th this year, we sat side by side in the first class of a plane heading to Thailand. I remember that I recognized you right away and you were concerned about an opening event in your new restaurant in China. However, for me, that trip was part of a winning prize of a contest won by me which included a 12 week course of Thai food. We talked during the flight about staff management, kitchen tools and you gave me this e-mail address to contact you.
So, back to the reason of this letter, I would like you to consider hire me as a chef in your branch in London for the following motives. Although I might seem young, I worked in cusines through France, Italy and Germany. Moreover, won contests around the world about food preparation and I am always eager for knowledge. I think that you could easily benefit from a employee like me and also it would be a dream come true work for you.
In conclusion, I hope you consider me as chef in your workforce. Looking forward to receive your response.
Kind regards,
John Long
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hink that you could easily benefit from a employee like me and also it would be a...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...chef in your workforce. Looking forward to receive your response. Kind regards, John...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39263245875 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7552495422 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244318180737 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849874843644 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702233103897 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142538402579 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485231038655 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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