You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about a few books that still in my possession and needed to be returned to the library until wednesday, but there has been a complication that will make the devolution quite difficult.
Let me explain in more details my situation. I am studying law in the college and the professor Seagate asked the class to write a paper regarding the severity of penalties in our state. Therefore, I went to the library and borrowed some criminal law and history books to finish my assignment.
However, during the weekend, I received a call from my aunt, which lives in the countryside, and asked me if I could spent some time with her in other to seek a fully recovery from a flu. She doesn't have either a son a daughter to look after her and her husband is traveling abroad. I shall be with her until his return on friday.
So, regarding the books deadline, since this is not an usual case, I was hoping if I could request to my friend Arthur deliver them for me even though I know that the return of any library material must be by the same person who requested it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rafael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...he countryside, and asked me if I could spent some time with her in other to seek a f...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('fully') instead an adjective, or a noun ('recovery') instead of another adjective.
...ent some time with her in other to seek a fully recovery from a flu. She doesnt have either a so...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...o seek a fully recovery from a flu. She doesnt have either a son a daughter to look af...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'books'' or 'book's'?
Suggestion: books'; book's
... return on friday. So, regarding the books deadline, since this is not an usual ca...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...g the books deadline, since this is not an usual case, I was hoping if I could req...
^^
Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y the same person who requested it. I look forward to hearing from you. You...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50773836647 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.511354007 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163995176874 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062737119195 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440013298811 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947409276244 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401767774798 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.