In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
There is no doubt that, according to studies about population, construction of buildings and homes have increased due to a populational raise. In order to give a plave live for this citizens, since cities became crowded, there are houses being built outside this locations, precisely in the meadow. This essay will approach this statement on build new domiciles in the countryside and explain why this is more beneficial.
First of all, some might rather argue that new residences in rural areas does more harm rather than good. Those who live in this places know how quiet it is because there are not many neighbours around; but new homes bring noise from construction, workers and also from the person next door. For example, my uncle always lived in a farm since he was a child; he always appreceated the contact with nature and was pleased to relax in that calmer place untill it became a construction site for all the houses and roads that were built and this stressed him out a lot making him ill. This is a case where it can see a drawback in expand the city limits to the countryside.
However, in my opinion, there are benefits even more relevants to consider regarding this matter. A higher number of houses in rural area means residents who will spend money in the region which is going to allow its' economic growth. In addition, there is going to be even more tax payers and this can boost the local economy higher even bringing tourists to visit . Besides, this gives the possibility to create relations and bonds with others because this happens when people get together, you work on your social skills. To exemplify, the same uncle of mine, who was unpolite and disgusted by the construction of new homes around him, made new friends causing him to behave in a good manner and he realized that when once were his farm sorrounded by grass, now became a town with a lot of activities and places to visit.
In conclusion, although some may think that building new residences in the field can bing noise to a quiet place, I believe this is an opportunity to enhance the local economy and attract tax payers which, by the way, could be your friend as becoming your neighbour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, by the way, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6987012987 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47221533047 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576623376623 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2481174845 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186544831453 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654183827785 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448288175777 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121546178794 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191518925525 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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