Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertising arise long time ago when the necessity to promote a person or a product was needed in order to increase his popularity or its sales. As time passes by, advertisement was being used not for only good propaganda, but for also for bad ones, which leads people to have the wrong idea about the content or realise that they actually need whats being advertised. This essay will agree with the statement that advertising is used to inform consumers about brand new goods that can possibly upgrade their lives.
Firstly, it is important to establish a negative side of advertisement, which is to create an unnecessary need for the product. For those which create a campaign for a merchandise, they must develop a sense of need the product, even if won’t be as useful as it seems. The wight loss pills are an outstanding example of a product that has great and intense advertising, although it doesn’t work as expected. Some people buy these goods because the propaganda gives them a lot of expections and, as studies demonstrate, there are psychological triggers to encourage a person to purchase a merchandise even if they don’t need to. So, it is a practise that should be banned because leads the consumer to a mistake.
However, publicity has it own positive side, which I agree: facilitate the customers to know about a product that can be really helpful. Everyday, someone discovers of develops a fresh merchandise. This is possible thanks to the technological growth, but it wouldn’t reach enough consumers if it wasn’t for advertisement. For example, new smartphones are being created every year with several improvements and enhances such as: access to internet, câmeras for vídeo chatting, waterproof function, calculator and many other features. Therefore, the goods that might improve a person’s life for the better should be advertised as much as possible in order to make everyone’s life easier.
Thus, publicity is getting stronger each day and will have even a bigger impact in people’s choices in the future since it can help or prejudice their decisions about a product or someone. This essay discussed the some of the negative and the positive aspects about advertising and agreed with the idea that advertisements can be helpful in other to announce a fresh product to a person that might use it, but would never know existence of it if wasn’t for propaganda.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1025 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01864932544 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7045380158 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.066666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187083683695 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659226115358 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047812545843 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12776413733 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322506815073 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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