Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the council. In your letter:
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre;
- explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for local community;
- describe the possible effect on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am wirting to address you a serious matter about ending the activities of the leisure centre which is being seen by the council an unwised place to spend money. On the following, I wil explain why you should not close this facility.
Although some use the centre to practice sports such as swmming, play soccer and basketball, other can rent the salon and host parties, fund raising events, reunions; this shows how versatile and the possibility of not only be seen as a sports centre. Me and my friends, for instance, enjoy planning parties for youngsters and elderly people and we always rent the salon located in the centre because allows us to invite more guests. Also, the centre hosts championships thanks to the soccer team which my brother participate.
Moreover, this leisure centre is in our town's history since it was built, in 1889, by some members of local families and it is considered one the most important monuments. It does more than bring people together, creates strong bonds between people and memories.
Shutting down the leisure centre mean that there will be no more a space to practice sports and this can generate a huge problem for the community because, according to studies around the globe, the habit of practicing sports prevent health diseases, decrease the chance of depression and it is good for the brain. In addition, people won't be a place to get together anymore, so they will be forced to stay look for a sports cente in other community and this could be devastating for this town's sake.
In conclusion, I hope you consider no closing the facility and take my arguments under consideration to make your decision. I expect hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
William Scott
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 417, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...so they will be forced to stay look for a sports cente in other community and this could...
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Line 9, column 490, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towns'' or 'town's'?
Suggestion: towns'; town's
... and this could be devastating for this towns sake. In conclusion, I hope you cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90033222591 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55362677419 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0378855159 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211902071851 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747589051112 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493715616779 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105643246086 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383689568685 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.