Nowadays airlines provide more benefits to the rich, often achieving this by reducing areas used by the economy class to provide more comfort to the first class passengers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that cheap economy class have given access of air travel to a common man as well. It is opined by many sociologists that to facilitate first class passengers, flights decrease the area allocated to the passengers of economy class. I do not agree by this statement and believe that elite treatment, including quality, food and drinks, is offered to the business class passengers is based on what they pay for those services.
To begin with, the facilities that are provided in business class which includes comfortable sitting arrangements is not affected by the arrangements of other class. This is because the exorbitant price paid by this class of passengers is used to provide them with better facilities. As flights earn more monetary benefits even by less number of seats in business class cabin, these passengers are provided with comfortable sitting arrangements. In the contrast, as economy class passengers are charged comparatively less, so to cover the cost, there are more seats with less leg space and space to move. This explanation throws the point into sharp relief that both business and economy class are handled independently without compromising comfort of one for the other.
Secondly, sitting arrangement is not the only extra provision given to first class passengers which differs from economy class, but there are facilities such as quality food, drinks and ground services. Again, these extra arrangements are done with the money which is paid by the rich people. This is common in the era of inflation that more one pays, more he or she will get in return. Thus, this cannot be described as any kind of discrimination between the rich and working class people.
In conclusion, people are provided with level of comfort according to what they pay to the service provider and flights are not exceptional. The increasing popularity of economy class shows that they are also satisfied with the services they get from airlines and in turn prove that their facilities are not compromised to offer more pleasant journey to the rich people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10233918129 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74844624707 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.561755894193 91% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.583270282 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383190119216 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13594786529 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480163653576 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227783167039 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348230105396 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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