Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, numerous tv
shows
and computer games have provided a comfortable platform for child's recreational activities. However, some nude tv
shows
and violence-related games have adverse ramifications on children to make them more aggressive and unsocial. this essay would discuss the detrimental impact of such activities, along with effective solutions.
First and foremost, violent tv programmes and video games can trigger children to adopt bad behaviour and make them more aggressive. this is because these games and
shows
are mostly related to crime, war, murder and so on..Also, as children do not have the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong, they perceive these demonic activities as good vibes without any hesitation. For instance, it was found by child association in the UK that children who often play violence-related games and watch tv
shows
of conflicting scenes are more likely to bully others, as well as,
show
more aggression to their parents. As a result, such games and activities can turn a child into a criminal in their later life, which is even an awful fortune for a country's development.
However, the problem is not insurmountable and several measures can be adopted to curb this issue. Firstly, the government should play an effective role to ban such kinds of games and programmes, that impart inappropriate lessons to the children. For example, in 2018, porn videos and conflicting games like pubg, were banned in Nepal by Nepalese authorities. Secondly , guardians must pay attention to their children's activities and make sure that their kids do not watch unethical tv
shows
or play violent games. Instead of letting children waste time on such activities, fruitful action that is not only recreational but also educative should be planned by parents to pass their children's time. In this way, neither the children would get the opportunity to learn about violence, nor adopt them through games and tv
shows
.
In conclusion, undeniably, today's kids are tomorrow's citizens. Therefore, it is a prime responsibility of parents and government to keep conflict-related games, programmes, and activities , from children, at bay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4649122807 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06121814001 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0385955942 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0406590940791 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167293668579 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286421683537 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.015413383705 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186828068938 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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