Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job; others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
it is considered by some that graduating from a college is the shortest way to securing a decent job, whilst others advocate that taking an experience could help in finding better work. this essay believes going for higher education proved to be a practical way for good placement. this essay will discuss both viewpoints, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, many reputed companies require a master's degree to apply for a job in their offices. this is because students get a good exposure to their courses in tertiary education, which leads them to possess stronger basic skills. Also, Interaction with other students adds soft skills abilities in one. Therefore, it is agreed that universities help students with greater knowledge and communication skills, which could help them to get better placement. For example, the study showed in Amity universities in March 2091, stated that Google, IBM, TCS offices recruit freshers only with the postgraduate degree.
On the other hand, many think taking exposure from several companies an individual could get better opportunities. In other words, employees who have old experiences will always be considered as any new joiner. Despite this, many experienced employees switch in smaller companies as MNC companies do not offer employment to them due to lack of education, which drives them to work in start-ups or new ventures. For instance, the survey conducted by The Times in June 2019 reported that 80% of the workforce in any start-up is either graduates or people from different studies background.
To conclude, this essay suggests that higher education provides magnified knowledge of courses with additional soft skills benefits, which ensure to any worker for their desired job. However, taking experience in various workplaces could guarantee a job but not with the excellent environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39322033898 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80806897432 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3938894238 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223068289755 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746259704457 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507692135802 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130943939292 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614207897795 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.