Nowadays airlines provide more benefits to the rich, often achieving this by reducing areas used by the economy class to provide more comfort to the first-class passengers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, airlines offer more assistance to first-class passengers by sacrificing the space of economy passengers in order to make them feel more luxuries. I strongly agree with the nation because rich people are prime contributors in the carrier business and their travelling impacts the business of an air company.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that first class travellers are the major source of income for any carrier, therefore providing benefits and comfort to them are always their top priority to run the business. Higher class passenger is paying the almost triple amount of a single economy passenger fair, thus these rich individuals have the rights to gain luxuries facilities from the air company staff in terms of comfort and other amenities. Recently, Singapore scheduled carrier management has decided to increase the number of seats in the business class compartment by reorganizing the total number of seats in the aeroplane to continue the drowning business from Lahore to Texas.
Secondly, wealthy individuals increase the popularity of carriers by travelling through it because these individuals are often followed by the majority of youth, thus providing facilities to rich is directly related with the business of an airline. For instance, Bollywood actress criticized XYC airline because of downgraded facilities and with that many followers raised initiative to boycott the airline which resulted in a huge loss for the airline. Therefore airlines prefer to provide more benefits and ease to rich on the cost of economy passengers to continue their business in profit.
In conclusion, I agree because rich customers are running a major business of Air Company and wealthy individuals' make carrier famous by roaming through it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40217391304 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79718357993 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3502788357 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219503967343 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100352671273 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071008385786 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133114578241 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523371495645 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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