Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because of its morally wrong to cause animal to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The argument over the use of animal experiments for medical purposes has not been settled yet, even though it has several benefits. However, many animal right extremists and animal lovers are totally opposing the idea saying it is inhuman and unnecessary. In this essay both sides will be discussed and opinion will be given.
It is commonly stated by scientists that animals have played a vital role in researching plenty of medicines. Scientists have proved that, most of the animals’ genes are very much similar to human being, that helps to predict the potential effect of certain medicines on human body. Not to forget, the inventions of drugs for diseases like TB, polio, cancer and meningitis etc., exemplifies the experimental use of animals in pharmaceutical. Moreover, proponents argue that mostly animals do not get hurt, instead, they get cured. The above facts show the necessity of animal experiments in medical research.
On the other hand, it is proclaimed by opponents that this act is not only cruel but also against the moral ethics. Every living being has right to live, stated by many animal lovers. It is also often believed by them that the pain animal go through is immense, which is unnecessary when there are other options. Last but not the least important thing advocated by them is, despite the similarities are there in humans and animals, there are significant differences too, which cannot be neglected. And, that is why some diseases are may not be as harmful as for animals compared to humans. These point show the irrelevance of animal experiments in pharmaceutical research.
To sum up, in my opinion, there ought to be control and limitation on use of animals in research, and also other alternatives should be taken into considerations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, as for, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08843537415 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81608004442 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7355711939 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292768897571 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951859895929 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419063101617 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175849973407 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03319036388 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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